This time in my series project i changed my style in what i was doing. i decided to work with objects outside instead of inside. I looked for object and things that also had that spooky effect to it. i thought that the images i put in would show something thing more than just inside work. I edited my original images.
I think this a very interesting series that you have developed over various drafts. I like how this series provides a more mysterious feel. I really like the last image of the doors and the stairs leading up to them. I think all are successful.
ReplyDeleteI think this is your best draft yet. The way you edited them makes them really successful. This images are different than your last ones, but still very strong. Your strongest images I think are the first two. Overall, fantastic job!
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you edited the photos to give them that vintage feel, but weren't you trying to work on shadows? So I was a little confused because of that. But overall great pictures.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job with following what you wanted to focus on for this series. You did a really good job editing all these images to show the effect you were going for. Great job!
ReplyDeleteimages 1, 2, and 4 seem to have more solid design approach. try to move your camera more to find a perspective that best frames the arrangement of shapes you are trying to capture.
ReplyDeletePictures 5 and 6 are very unique and they are both beautifully lit with a somber feel that makes this sepia style photography even more dynamic. Good job!
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