This is my third draft of my project and the last time i did this i didn't focus on what i did in the first draft as much because i wanted to see if i could push my images to a different level. i thought that maybe going back to little bit more shadows so that these new images will mach with the first ones, but with a different texture.
I really like the water fountain close-up one. I think the editing and effects you chose for it work well. I also really like the lighting in the first image of the bag. It seems like the light is just focused on the ag and creates this descending shadow or something? Good job.
ReplyDeleteI think you have just gotten better and better through out this series. All of these photos are strong, and some of the shadows you captured makes the photos really nice. I think that all of these photos are great, and you really captured shadows in a abstract way, adding your own creativity but also keeping it simple. My favorite would be the second water fountain one. Although, I think that these photos are still pretty different from your first draft. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI really like the different styles you used. I also really like the way that you got all the shadows. You did a great job using the lighting, all the pictures look really slick. The one with the sidewalk is my favorite.
ReplyDeleteI like the coloring on these, not too bright. I like the last photo the best, the way you edited it, it makes it seem very old.
ReplyDeleteAll these pictures are nice and the shading and shadows in all of them are really cool. The only thing is that I think the first 3 images are a little too simple and mondaine, compared to pictures 4 and 5, which are really beautiful and textured. Overall, nice job! You should take more outside pictures
ReplyDeleteI really like your second and last image! I think they show what you're trying to accomplish best! Great job with this draft!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you improved your series with shadows and various lightings. I also like how you captured these images in black and white and from numerous angles.
ReplyDeleteThis series is really good. I like the gritty and realistic feel to your photos. The last shot is especially good.
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